< pre-writing protocol >
< Rules of poetic form: c joint >
< draft >
< final version >
ofuscated studio with her
< draft 1 >
ect morning
6:30 a.m. and the ECT ward is hopping,
nurses with red plastic smiles wait
to undress you, help you pee in a bucket
before strapping you down to a metal framed
cot. They tell me to wait outside, get a cup
of coffee next door.
Last night at the restaurant, flyaway hair & vacant
eyed, you asked me if you looked weird. The other patients
on this ward look like actors from One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest.
I tell you: Compared to them, you look
like Miss America. We laugh before I slither out,
leaving you with the silicone Nurse Ratchett, lacquered
talons clutching your limp hand. You look up at me
and suddenly I know how you must have felt
my first day of kindergarten, and how twenty years later,
you still haven’t forgiven yourself.
< draft 2 >
Morning, ECT Ward
Bright fluorescents mimic the sun. Patients
lumped in chairs wheeled here & there.
Our bodies of no consequence
until we trade your name for a backless gown.
Now the nurses come alive for us,
their red plastic smiles in place
as they wait to undress you, hold you
over the bucket, then strap you to your cot.
Do I look strange? you ask.
The other patients with their flyaway hair
& unblinking eyes, wander the floor.
Compared to them you look like Miss America.
The nurses suggest I go out for a coffee, some air.
Your eyes grow wide as I edge toward the door.
O air! O escape!
I’ve done it. Left you in the grip
of those dirty hands, quick for a cure.
I, daughter, the betrayer.
I’ve done what you would never do.
Walked you to the edge, then turned away.
When they wheel you back to me
you’re hard to recognize:
flyaway hair, unblinking eyes,
the smell of urine on your gown.
And though I’ve followed every place
you’ve gone, I dare not to walk too close,
my own face reflected in the glass
sharded at the water’s edge.
< final version >
Dropping My Mother Off at the Electro-Convulsive Therapy Ward
Do I look strange? she asks.
The other patients with their flyaway hair
& unblinking eyes wander the floor.
Compared to them you look like a movie star.
The nurses suggest I get some air.
Her eyes widen as I edge toward the door,
leaving her in gloved hands,
quick for a cure.
I catch my face in the sharp fluorescence
of the bathroom mirror.
Have my dark eyes darkened?
Was that shadow there before?
As a girl I followed her
down any steep or muddied path.
Who will I follow when she is gone?
When they wheel her back to me:
faint bloom of urine on her gown.
What happened in that room
while I drank coffee just outside the door?
Mother, I’ve done what you would never do.
Walked you to the edge, then turned away.
< draft >
Goodnight Moon, Goodnight Red Balloon
I write you a letter in the parking lot of a grocery store.
At a party
a white boy offers me a job
as a 9-1-1 dispatcher.
My mother slept for the entirety of my life.
Everyone beautiful in slumber.
Sweet sunset, stereo, shame.
I am not afraid anymore.
I am subscribing to the Detroit Free Press
after good sex
and a tongue that tastes like winter.
My father the quiet chirp of a dying
smoke alarm.
I am a good operator.
Is anyone injured?
Does it look like a gun?
Sometimes the music is so loud
my heart aches like a coffin.
I am begging you
to stay alive. I am hoping
the dead still love us
years beyond
their withered bodies.
Bright bones, bright kite.
What’s your emergency?
My stupid face in the mirror.
Daisies sprouting from my lips.
My friends telling me they love me.
< REVISION >
Goodnight Moon, Goodnight Red Balloon
I write you a letter in the parking lot of a grocery store.
At a party
a white boy offers me a job
as a 9-1-1 dispatcher.
Someone is running their hands through my hair
and I like it.
My mother slept for the entirety of my life.
Everyone beautiful in slumber.
Sweet sunset, stereo, shame.
I am not afraid anymore.
I am subscribing to the Detroit Free Press
after good sex
and a tongue that tastes like winter.
My father the quiet chirp of a dying
smoke alarm.
I am a good operator.
Is anyone injured?
Does it look like a gun?
Sometimes the music is so loud
my heart aches like a coffin.
I am begging you
to stay alive. I am hoping
the dead love us
years beyond
their withered bodies.
Bright bones, bright balloon.
What’s your emergency?
My stupid face in the mirror.
Daisies sprouting from my lips.
My friends telling me they love me.
< draft >
LAMPROPHYRE
Forget me
The wind has come for us
While trying to change the vacant sheets of night
Into flags of lower Fahrenheit
I loved you once – did I not?
Did I not see you
In the wind
Altering its lightbulb
Electric filament of my love
For your covert
Rounded shape operation
Which you call me
Lamp?
You suck my rasping tongue
Into the night
While I wither away from daylight
I suck the adult
In you which is a parasite
You have horny teeth
You are jawless
With such unlambent-like bone structures
And, I am blind again
After being seen
Of my virtues
Of my destitutions
Of my substitutions
Of my dissolutions
I have no reason to believe
In this garment
Which you call
Groundmass
Which I call
Volcanic
Which everyone thinks
Is the conical fragments
Of me being once
Gas, vapor, or fissure
Of today or tomorrow
You assure me
That you are solid
You are rock
Even when it rains
Suddenly
Even after you alter
The DNA of all your prostitutes
Into homogeneous
Methamphetamine
< revision >
LAMPROPHYRE
Forget me
The wind has come for us
While trying to change the vacant sheets of night
Flags of lower Fahrenheit
I loved you once – did I not?
Did I not see you
In the wind
Altering its lightbulb
Electric filament of my love
For your covert
Rounded shape operation
Which you call me
Lamp?
You suck my rasping tongue
While I wither away from daylight
I suck the adult
In you which is a parasite
You have horny teeth
You are jawless
And, I am blind again
After being seen
Of my virtues
Of my dissolutions
I have no reason to believe
In this garment
Which you call
Groundmass
Which I call
Volcanic
Which everyone thinks
Is the conical fragment
Of me being once
Gas, vapor, or fissure
Even after you alter
The DNA of all your prostitutes
Into homogeneous
Methamphetamine
You are rock
You are solid
< early version >
how to disclose
In the states you & I live, I am a criminal, & by morgue,
Cell or sanitarium, they will put me away. It’s all ways
My fault. After Good night, John Boy! I let my selves loose
Like mice scouring a soiled kitchen floor, blind but hungry
Beyond the good sense God gave us all to smell a trap—
Loose booty, you big dummy—& scuttle-butt to an other
Other, a darker corridor, where the last piece
Of Havarti & dill was waiting in the form
Of a man sculpted / like a Magnum
Chocolate bar I had to devour. Pretty teeth &
Nappy hair & accipitral tongue keen to threadbare
My ischioanal fossae. I crawled atop his grotty bed,
Eyes blazing, high on the hype of his profile pic,
Let the heat rend his Magnum sleeve & sunder me.
< FINAL VERSION >
dis closure
In the states you & I love, I am a criminal, & by morgue,
Cell or sanitarium, they will put me away. It’s all ways
My fault. After Good night, John Boy! I let my selves loose
Like mice scouring a soiled kitchen floor, blind but hungry
Beyond the good sense God gave us all to smell a trap—
Loose booty, you big dummy!—& scuttle-butt to an other
Other, a darker corridor, where the last piece
Of Havarti & dill was waiting in the form
Of a waiting man’s flesh, sculpted like a Magnum
chocolate bar I had to devour. Round & round we go …
In the states you & I live, his pretty teeth, ensconced
in golds & his free & nappy hair, also criminal, his
accipitral tongue keen to threadbare my ischioanal
fossa: Where we stop, nobody knows! He crawled atop
this grotty bed, eyes blazing, high on the hype
of his profile pic, let the heat rend his Magnum sleeve &