< draft 1 >
ode to my hair
< final version >
ode to my hair (reprise)
tricky disappearer. noble loser.
first break up of my body. one version
of this poem is my homies making jokes
at the title: this a concept piece huh?
this finna be an erasure. you do
be editing poems as short as you can.
one version of this poem is all pictures
of eyes & fingertips: everybody
who be touching my dome without asking
or with asking & a laugh tucked under
their tongue, the consent just a prelude for
a punchline. but when i lost it—my hair
i mean—i wasn’t that sad. it was dumb
to expect to remain untouched by genes.
< draft >
it is pretty to think you will say hello
hello, my name is
being you must feel like the carnival
like the carnival, I have many songs
the carnival is a kingdom of light and sound
the carnival is spectacle after spectacle
you’re so often like yourself: the dissonance
of a hand against a cup
come out of your coffee
– a different kind of spectacle
I want to speak this carnival of my mouth
it’s not empty – just rest after rest
knock on the door of my dress
anything can be a door if you give it a push
you’re so often like yourself: the dissonance
of too many songs playing at once
what song I wouldn’t sing
to enter the empty kingdom of your hand
< final >
International Classification of Diseases-10 F94.0:
Selective Mutism
< revision >
perder
sidewalks lined with branches
flashing scarlet buds & i want
to know if it’s true—my grandma
in the ground for a couple of years—
is it long enough? is it her lipstick
blushing the blooms of the trees?
or am i trying to forget
the only lesson we are required to learn:
the first loss is not the last loss
& once the losing begins
it won’t stop
until it has taken everything.
< draft >
perder
sidewalks lined with branches
flashing scarlet buds & i want
to know if it’s true—my grandma
in the ground for a couple of years—
is it long enough? is it her lipstick
blushing the blooms of the trees
that bow their heads to greet me?
or am i trying to forget
the only lesson we are required to learn:
the first loss is not the last loss
& once the losing begins
it won’t end until it has won everything.
< revision >
revolution
The trees of time bend to the sun
I have written this before
an industrial area across the street from a post office
where consorts of joy appear
in the script
people rush toward other people
on the edge of a continent
container ships empty
crabapples fall toward the concealed
planetary core
where the multitude of undersides
finds a common point
ink presses to paper
wound shows through the gauze
speaking humanly
does not one lover belong with another
a presence contradicts a crowd
who loving contradicts
violets tangled in a rubber tire
dog chasing a demon’s tail
< draft >
vision
Once,
I saw with my mind
an industrial area across the street from a post office
where consorts of joy appeared,
white violets,
letters in a welded box.
One thing does not belong with another.
From the future I am sorting
my many wrongs,
though at the time here you were.
< draft >
Green Island
My father, wearing sneakers in the water
Or maybe another man, some stranger
Far off in the water wearing sneakers
Where the water deepens gradually stepping
Softly as on breaking flesh
The man moved slowly in a wide arc
Like a minute hand
The sea moving around him
Seemed to withdraw or thin
To go far into the reef in my sneakers
To walk from the beach
Into the crackling ocean
That recedes like a cow in a field
Is difficult and might not be allowed
I am on shore or my toes touch the water
Or I’ve been walking out a long time
Getting my sneakers wet
And still the man is distant and still the sea walks casually away
Like a cloud pulls over the sun making you think
You have done something to deserve
A brief breath of darkness
Which will end when you’ve done better
When you’ve looked correctly
Or recognized that you might deserve for a minute
To lose the sun
The island turning in the ocean
To slouch its way back towards a cool house
With a blue dirt patch under a bush
A child points at while inside the yellow windows
The grim duty of dinner organizes people
Into a family
There is a reef peeling off the island like a scab
There is a hole under a bush next to the house
A man walks on the shelf of shin-deep water in the sea
A child looks at the hole like an empty crèche
It is the man’s shelf
It is the child’s hole
The dirt underneath is alive and sore
Or rubbed thin and relieved
It’s had a bath, its hair has been washed
In the dark someone has been singing to it
All my life, like grains of sand at the bottom of a suitcase
Was this possibility
I turn away and after a while you have moved a few degrees
A dark figure backlit by bright water
Or a whitish figure surrounded by excited, blue-green water
Or months later in your soft Green Island t-shirt with the velvety writing
A velvety white sun, a boat and capital letters
The backyard darkens, I’m stirring this bluing dirt patch
The twilight persists, we’re uncovered except for trees
Looking forward as if in wind
Trying to open the eyes
The body wants to be hung up in a cradle
Back somewhere it’s already been—
To be folded carefully in a closet
So that if anyone might come back looking
It would be natural and immediate
To fall back into their hands and be plied and shushed
And hung over windows to soften light
And slid along the rim of a bowl making the air ring
Dear one, this house is where an island ends its day
And this house, with its welcoming holes
Its anxious sleep
Is made meaningful by that bright, far-off island
FIRST DRAFT BOX
FINAL DRAFT BOX
< final verSION >
Green island
My father, wearing sneakers in the water
or maybe another man, some tourist, far off in the water wearing sneakers
(that’s what they do, the coral’s so sharp)
ticks from spot to spot, and the sea
seems to be heading someplace else
I am on the shore or my toes touch the water
or I have been walking out a long time and my sneakers are soaked and still the man is farther out than me
or I’m looking at him from the water, with the island behind him, turning its back on the sea
The scene, like a cow in a field, seems to walk away without moving its legs
Where is the reef? It’s out for a stroll
Suddenly our feet are very dry
Under a bush is a cool dirt patch I stir with a finger
Inside the yellow windows my aunt and mother make dinner
The softest dirt, almost grainless
I will not have time to really go under this bush, but even as I stand here I’m hesitating
Even as I stand here I’ve had a bath, my hair has been washed, in the dark someone has been singing to me
and inside the suitcase on the closet’s high shelf are a few particles of sand
and on my father’s soft blue Green Island t shirt
is a velvety white sun, a boat and capital letters
as he sits on a lawn chair in the evening in our backyard
by the house, where the island ends its day
through our hands, as they lose shape
as a seething point, like a star.