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KID’S KINGDOM
My mama said
I ain’t allowed
to get upset and cry
if my face is in public & I ain’t allowed
to sit with boys or hang with boys or kiss on boys or pray with boys
& I ain’t allowed to curse or listen to cursing or mimic cursing & I ain’t allowed
to think about sex or talk about sex or watch sex or have sex
or pretend sex or sex myself or god is
going to get in that ass. If I think I want to
go to heaven, I better start confessing my sins
cause god knows what I been doing
when she ain’t around. I better start finding the right
examples to follow in the kingdom. Start finding me
a disciple in the church to learn from. If I want to
get baptized, ima have to write down every time I sex myself
or cry or curse so the church can pray about it later. They
don’t understand why I’m so angry. I am a
child. Who do I think I’m talking to? Who do I think
I am? I am not allowed to raise my voice
or put any base in my voice or Mama is
gonna slap the shit out me, actin’ a fool
in front of all these people. Ima have to change
my tone because no, god is not allowed to be on my side.
I am the child, she is my elder. Even if I think
my mama is wrong, even if I think my mama is sick,
even if she’s gone off her meds again, I better pray
about it. Even if she beats me till I can’t stand. Pray
about it. Even if I think this shit’s gotten out of hand. Pray
about it. No god, does not talk to me and I’m definitely
not allowed to feel bad or have bad days or say
anything about my feelings because there are people in Africa
who are hungry, who didn’t have Jesus in their life
and I was being real selfish right then, you know.
Be humble. Sit down. Show some honor. Share the word of god
with your friends. Be in the house by 4pm.
No, you cannot go outside. No, you cannot go to your friend’s house.
No, you cannot go to a freaking party. You are only sixteen.
Who the fuck do you think you are?
I need to pull up my goddamned shirt and cover my chest.
Cover my legs. Cover my face. Look down when she talking to
me.
She raised me, she don’t owe me shit. Disrespectful, ungrateful little heffer
if I don’t get my black ass back in this goddamned house.
Why I got to be so embarrassing? Not remembering things right.
Always arguing . Being ungodly. Following the ways of the world.
Not listening. Being liberal. God does not want women to reveal their bodies.
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KID’S KINGDOM
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GARDEN OF GETHSEMANE
I cannot tell you what the trees whispered to him that night
air ripe with the scent of living, fruits pungent, leaves
clapping, harmonising with the crickets rhythmic screech.
What could trees whisper to a Black man juggling sorrow
on the eve of his catastrophe, face tortured, back bent
from the weight of prophesy, kneeling in damp soil,
thoughts wrestling. Each worry a serrated knife gorging flesh.
Say he was weeping, beating his chest, murmuring big man
don’t cry, wanting to unshackle from his father’s heirloom
but what Papa does not force their son into a square box,
each corner reinforced with the black tar of hardening expectations.
And the garden was not a tonic. When he spoke to the leaves,
did they not turn their backs, curl into their spine to recede
into their own nourishment, leaving him to keep his own vigil
on this seemingly ordinary night, the eve of his prophesied death.
And those disciples! My soul is exceedingly sorrowful, even
unto death, tarry ye here, and watch with me, he asked them.
Oh those fickle hard ears men, how their snores became bass
in the ripe music of this garden. How they will regret
not catching the tremor in his voice, the slight waver
each pause. Regret will sit heavy on their chests
whenever they remember this garden, and not reading
the nuances, his pathos, between each utterance of his asking.
Sit ye here while I go to pray. Meaning, sit so we can converse
in the language of grief. Meaning, it is my last night with you.
Let us partake in the language of wake, lick down dominos,
and make ole talk, come nah man. Meaning, be my brothers tonight.
Come lick down double six and rock the table, disturb the still
of the night. He wanted ole talk, lime and labrish.
My soul exceedingly sorrowful even unto death.
But his brother’s snores mingled with the owls hoot and the leaves
turned their backs, while his kinfolk sprawl out in sleep.
The nails, the nails
bones breaking, splintering
bearing timber on your back
like a donkey carrying load
Say he is weeping and beating his chest muttering
big man don’t cry, Mourning his lack of ordinaries.
Mourning his body will not rot, worm and decay.
Maggots will not feed on his flesh.
Now his palms dig into the soil, earth in fingernails
shifting the dirt, man’s flesh is moulded from, burying
this sorrowful weight, then standing as the stuttering
light of morning approaches.
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“LETTER TO THE JUMPER…
Yesterday, a man jumped from the bridge beside my house. Naomi, what does it mean that I once threw pebbles over this bridge into water I couldn’t even see? Last year I drove over this bridge, imagined the car going over the rails. I didn’t want to leave my body, but it had exhausted me.
…All right, you have… you can do more work on that later…”
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First complete draft (sent to a friend on February 21, 2017)
[7/10/2016]
Yesterday, Naomi, a man jumped to his death from the bridge beside my house.
A runner found his body on the path fifty yards below, lying in a shape I cannot conjure for you.
Naomi, does it matter that I once threw pebbles over this bridge to see how fast they’d fall?
I imagined my body the size of a hundred small stones moving in unison, my hips pressing the rail.
How I longed for the rocks’ silence as they fell to the green park below.
What I wanted to kill, Naomi, was the question.
But I could never lift both of my body’s feet from the earth at once.
Today I press my face to the bridge-facing window, feel the sun’s heat gather at the border of the pane.
Today I watch the cut red tulips open towards the waning light.
Naomi, I have so much more to tell you about being alive.
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First complete revision (sent to a friend on February 15, 2018)
JULY 10, 2016
Yesterday, Naomi, a man jumped to his death from the bridge beside my house.
A runner found his body on the path fifty yards below, lying in a shape I cannot conjure for you.
Does it matter that I once threw pebbles over this bridge to see how fast they’d fall?
I imagined my body the size of a hundred small stones moving in unison.
How I longed for the rocks’ silence as they fell to the green park below.
What I wanted to kill was the question.
But I could never lift both of my body’s feet from the earth at once.
Today I press my cheek to the bridge-facing window, feel the sun’s heat gather at the border of the pane.
Today I watch the cut red tulips open towards the waning light.
Naomi, I have so much more to tell you about being alive.
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BRUNCH POEM
We ordered sweet bubbly drinks,
swallowed them slow with grace.
Our throats scratch under the herbs
our bartender put on top for garnish
before she lit them on fire. This story
holds no more room for me to pray.
This place used to be our temple.
Every Sunday we made sweet music
and danced together. If I dig further,
I can remember incense and flea bane,
their bursts of scent and color. My virgin
mouth forgives our sins. The sugar burns.
After finishing our drinks, we walk home
and fuck and it’s holy like blessings extended
each Sunday morning. We skin the oranges,
grind beans, lean into the afternoon. We offer
our meal remains to the compost. We meditate
and metabolize, then ploop! after more exercise,
before we burn the dryer lint, before we rest.